译： Lung Collapsing Lyrics 中的韵脚分析

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在这一篇歌词中Percee P几乎采用了所有的押韵手法，将近一半的字都是韵脚，这位MC的恐怖功力令人叹为观止。

本文尝试通过韵脚解析，来研究Percee P的Flow魅力之谜。

原歌词 & 翻译

I'm the capital P-E-R-C-double E dash P-P dash double E-C-R-E-P in me
我是大写字母P E R C双E碰撞到P P碰撞两个E CREP在我的名字里

shots in top lyrical fitness that's why you bit this
为什么你听这歌，因为我找到了一流的作词状态

get this, I got a witness and I won't quit this
好好听，好好见证我不会退出说唱

and flip flop, get dropped, shit I'm in tip top shape
噼里啪啦的抛出韵脚，我是一流的货色

lyrics escape, can't even catch him with tape
歌词都无影无踪，甚至听我盘的时候都没法捕捉

main attraction using my brain a fraction
仅仅用了我脑海的一个碎片就能达到牛逼的歌曲吸引力

of my knowledge or wisdom a lyrical rhythm'll give 'em
他们是我的知识、智慧，具有歌词性的韵律现在我都给你

a migraine, before I reign on stage
在我支配舞台前，我让你们偏头痛

you better walk like the fingers on a yellow page
你翻歌词的时候最好像手指翻黄页那样迅速

rhymes and homicides are lethal, nobody's equal to me
我的韵脚和杀人犯一样都是致命的，没人能和我比拟

no one survived, so why make a sequel?
无人生还，我就不用写续集了

MC Percee P give no mercy to anybody MC'in 'till they reimburse me
MC Percee P没有怜悯，把所有MC都剿灭，所以他们不用补偿我的仁慈

I cold grip the mic, strike then rip his life
我冷酷的握着麦克，突然粉碎他的生涯

my raps dilapidate adversaries with kryptonite
我的说唱毁灭敌人用kryptonite(一种令superman阳痿的物质，这个比喻非常异想天开）

hit you with a verse, make you disperse but first
用一个verse打击你，让你滚开，但首先

call up a hearse 'cause Perc leave you worse than this
我得给你叫个灵车，因为我让你的下场变得糟糕无比

brain cells shatter, MCs scatter
脑细胞都被我粉碎，说唱歌手抱头窜鼠

I splatter them all with something that ain't even matter
我喷向他们，即使他们有所依仗照样无济于事

got a ladder on stage women runnin', comin' every age
你们像年龄不同的娘们，上台还得要个梯子，到处乱窜(比喻很棒）

but never(?) ring on my finger this thing'll linger un-engaged
但是哥们始终保持坐怀不乱

renegade, Percee P ain't afraid of no one
背叛，我谁都不怕

no gun or son, I'm gettin' paid and my rec's played
我得到报酬，沉溺说唱游戏

every weekend like lottery, rap's a part of me
每个周都好像中奖了一样，说唱是我的一部分

words flow but don't show no blood in you artery
你的歌词好像有flow，但是不能展现你动脉中血液的流淌（讽刺徒有其表的flow)

ladies greet me, treat me like the stars
女人们祝贺我，恭维我好像我是明星

when I show up they start to throw up all their panties and bras at me
当我开始演出他们向我扔出了文胸和内裤

rap is the last of me now to gas women with my pencil
一直说唱是我的下场现在我用铅笔调戏女人

I send you into a mental catastrophe
我把你送入精神的灾难

this rhyme ain't designed for prime time
因为这些韵脚都是业余时间搞得

and a battle line for logic behind every mind
我的每个想法都充满了逻辑，即使他是火药味的歌词

tryin' to rhyme with intellect, spellin' all incorrect
想要有智慧的押韵，但是却不正确的发音

defy your every line, mine's an introspective
相比你的词，我的歌词是自省的

those in the premises will always remember this
人们将会永远记得

record, elected your top ten, stop then and reminisce
选择你的十大专辑，你会停下想起

Percee P, no rapper get worse than me
Percee P没人比我厉害

when it comes to rhymes every verse will be
当弄到韵脚的时候，每个段落都将是

harder than titanium, parts from your cranium
硬度超过了钛金属，你的头骨 （这个harder应该是双关，字面意思是比钛硬，实际意思是特别难
写）
burst, disperse, every verse explodes like uranium
会被我的韵脚炸的分裂，每个段落的爆炸力就像铀元素（我用过这个比喻，哈哈）

so, yo, don't upset me, 'cause that will only get me
朋友，别烦我，因为那只会让我

mad enough, it's bad enough, I had enough of
更疯，这样就不太妙了，我受够了

lettin' this amateur rock a cord or wallabies
让你们这些业余摇滚歌手被绞死

I bet they're all the P's
我猜这都是我的办事方式

and if they ain't they gonna be
你们不听这即将发生

to all y'all critics, just admit it
所有的评论，接受就是了

my style is dope
我的风格确实牛逼

you can't cope and you hope to get it
没人能竞争过我，都想模仿我的风格

you're captivated, activated, rap related fans leave infatuated
你们上瘾了，被启发了，说唱的歌迷都着迷了

when I get open the place starts smokin'
当我进入说唱场地开始抽

you start chokin', showboat and Perc get broken
你开始装逼卖弄，我揭发了你的老底

rehearse a while, let it get versatile
好好练习吧，能不能多元化一点

I reverse your style, ok, be then maybe Perc'll smile
我颠倒你的方式，可能这样我会耻笑你

you're put in a stretcher
你被装入担架

when I let the style get ya', I bet ya'
当我让这种风格展示出来，我猜你

sweat the Rhyme Inspector
可能会在押韵探长前流下冷汗

records you manufacture are so wack you can't
本来想录歌，但发现太弱了还是不录吧

sing 'em or bring 'em, people fling 'em back at ya
唱自己的歌的时候观众向你破口大骂

you're the fattest, baddest, of the best copycata's
你是模仿者中最胖，最傻逼的

when you played it, it's rated G for garbage 'cause that's your status
nobodies iller
当你播放自己的歌的时候，标注匪帮说唱，其实是垃圾，因为你的地位被人小瞧

on the mic you never know when I'mma strike 'em like the Zodiac killer
拿起麦克的时候你不知道我干掉他们就像十二宫杀手（Nice!)

this twenty two year old veteran, you ain't better than
我是22年的退伍老兵，你怎么可能比我好

medicine won't help, slicks think we're peddlin'
你的说唱都是华而不实的推销，药都治不好你了

when writers bite and hype the type parasites swipe
当作词人研究这首歌词，宣传这个方式，模仿这种风格

you're bitin', you're stage fright, don't even hold the mic right
你太傻，你令人感到丑陋，别再拿麦克风了

歌词解析

I'm the capital P
-E-R-C-double E 
dash P
-P dash double E-C-R-E-P in me

一个长句子拆成4较长的短句押韵，逻辑需要词汇量要大所以说的快

shots in top 
lyrical fitness
that's why you bit this

注意句首的up韵脚和第四句的一系列韵脚的对应如果只听2、3、4句会有韵脚A(up) xxxxxx 韵脚B(is) 韵脚A(up)韵脚C开始（ape)，句末的 this 转换成 shape ，发音相近，然后合理的转换成 tape

get this, I got a witness 
and I won't quit this 
...
and flip flop, get dropped, 
shit I'm in 
tip top shape

前面也没闲着，除了 ape 这个韵脚, flop、dropped、tip top 交叉对应第二句的 up 韵脚

lyrics escape, 
can't even catch him with tape

连续一个韵脚的轰炸

main attraction 
using my brain a fraction

漂亮的停顿，简洁的一句把一个韵脚用两次完事

of my knowledge or wisdom a lyrical rhythm'll give 'em

不带停顿一气呵成的韵脚轰炸

a migraine, 
before I reign
on stage

这个重音压在 stage，前面两个押韵，句末一个押韵

you better walk like the fingers on a yellow page

重音放在yellow，导致flow的变化，押第八句的韵脚(age)

rhymes and homicides 
are lethal, 
nobody's equal 
to me

to me 这个词语看似与韵脚无关，说的比较轻，看看第12句，交叉韵

no one survived, 
so why make a sequel?

对应10句 homicides 和 equal

MC  
Percee 
P give no mercy 
to anybody MC'in '  
till they reimburse me

对应10句的 me 韵脚，一句连续押韵5次

I cold grip the mic, strike then rip his life 
14my raps dilapidate adversaries with kryptonite  
grip rip rap &mic life nite ate-life-mic &grip-rip-raps

押双韵

hit you with a verse, 
make you disperse but first

句首句尾均押韵

call up a hearse 
'cause Perc leave you worse 
than this

than is 说得轻

brain cells 
shatter, 
MCs scatter 
I splatter them all with something that ain't even matter

这句非常快

got a ladder on stage 
women runnin', comin' every age

转韵 (er)到(age) 还是拿手的押韵之前用其他韵脚连续押韵几次(In)

but never(?) ring on my finger this thing'll linger un-engaged

类似第七句高速连续韵脚轰炸

renegade, Percee P ain't afraid of no one 
no gun or son, I'm gettin' paid and my rec's played 
every weekend like lottery, rap's a part of me    
words flow but don't show no blood in you artery

转换韵脚教科书，很喜欢句末句首押韵，例如20句的 renegade 和 un-engaged ，紧接着开启新韵脚 one-gun-son ，在转换到 play、lottery、me、artery 这些韵脚

ladies greet me, treat me like the stars  
when I show up they start to throw up all their panties and bras 
at me 
rap is the last of me now to gas women with my pencil rap-last-me-gas-pencil
I send you into a mental catastrophe

pencil 韵脚连续押韵（send you-mental)，接着回到 me 韵脚(catastrophe)

this rhyme 
ain't designed 
for prime time     
and a battle line 
for logic                
behind every mind

28、29句的押韵模式可以这么看：

停顿押韵停顿押韵停顿押韵押韵
押韵停顿停顿停顿押韵停顿押韵

tryin' to rhyme with intellect, spellin' all incorrect

他在说 tryin to rhyme 和 spellin 用时是一样的，拆分成2个短句的话，句子不对仗，韵脚对仗

defy your every line, mine's an introspective

line mine 又是一个29句的交叉韵 句末押韵30句
使用了大家都会的押韵方式，第一句xxxx-a,xxxx-a 第二句xxxxxx,xxxxxx-a

those in the premises will always remember this 
record, elected your top ten, stop then and reminisce

类似30 31句的大众押韵方式

Percee P, 
no rapper get worse 
than me 
when it comes to rhymes 
every verse           
will be

no rapper get worse 说的快些，和下句 every verse 占用同样的时间，精准的切割 will be-than me

harder than titanium, parts from your cranium 
burst, disperse, every verse explodes like uranium 
harder than ti
tanium,parts
from cranium

注意 titanium 这个单词的分割：
效果是xxxx
韵脚A-xx
xx-韵脚A
韵脚B-韵脚B-韵脚B-韵脚B-xxx韵脚A 韵脚的不对仗达到不一样的flow美感

so, yo, don't upset me, 
'cause that will only 
get me 
mad enough, it's bad enough, I had enough of

这两句启发是，小学级别的单词做韵脚，而不是用晦涩的词语强迫押韵so yo & me only & enough

lettin' this amateur rock a cord or wallabies 
I bet they're all the P's 
and if they ain't they gonna be

语气变化wallabies-P-be 平仄效果

to all y'all critics, just admit it 
my style is dope 
you can't cope 
and you hope 
to get it 
you're captivated, 
activated, 
rap related 
fans 
leave infatuated

43、44、45、46整体看是个交叉韵脚体系 ics-it-dope-cope-hope-it-ated-ated-ated-ated
而46句的停顿有意思

when I get open the place starts smokin' 
you start chokin', showboat and Perc get broken

老手法

rehearse a while, let it get versatile 
I reverse your style, ok, be then maybe Perc'll smile

韵脚拆分的押韵手法，49句的 rehearse 对应 versatitle 的 versa while 对应 versatile 的 title
50句 reverse 对应 perc，style 对应 smile

you're put in a stretcher 
when I let the style 
get ya', 
I bet ya' 
sweat the Rhyme Inspector

get ya’i bet ya 这个连续押韵的方式很多 rapper 都会有，很熟悉

records you manufacture
are so wack you can't 
sing 'em or bring 'em, people fling 'em back at ya

拿手的连续轰炸
51 52 53 54 55句末都在押 ya-ure 这个韵脚

you're the fattest, baddest, of the best copycata's 
when you played it, it's rated G for garbage 'cause that's your status 
nobodies iller

类似55句的老把戏 不过句尾进行了转韵

on the mic you never know when I'mma strike 'em like the Zodiac killer 
this twenty two year old veteran, you ain't better than 
medicine won't help, slicks think we're peddlin' 
when writers bite and hype the type parasites swipe 
you're bitin', you're stage fright, don't even hold the mic right

继续韵脚轰炸结束歌

Percee P 特点总结

大量的韵脚：

任意取出几句，都会发现交叉韵，整首歌是个交叉韵脚的体系，一般的rapper只顾虑四句四句
的韵脚非常死板，他的转韵非常流畅，分析他的歌词非常愉快，像是捉迷藏，有很多漫不经心的
韵脚与前面几句对应

丰富的押韵方式：

押单韵＋押双韵

韵脚A连续后押韵脚B，韵脚C连续后押韵脚B

将韵脚A拆分成韵脚B韵脚C，两句话中句首押韵脚BC句末押韵脚A

两句话中，只有一个韵脚，通过停顿造成flow的变化：
停顿押韵停顿押韵停顿押韵押韵
押韵停顿停顿停顿押韵停顿押韵

对仗的使用：

韵脚对仗：

歌词对仗，从而韵脚对仗的把戏简直是小儿科，看看他怎么做的吧，歌词不对仗，通过加速放缓
语速达到韵脚的对仗，

韵脚不对仗：

两句歌词，他是这么切割的
harder than ti
tanium,parts
from cranium
burst, disperse, every verse explodes like uranium

一个句歌词当四句来写：

大量的词汇的4个短句组成了一个长句，所以一句话中又是能押韵4、5次

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